Today I was learning to write persusive writing.
I enjoyed typing it.
I enjoyed typing it.
I found it challenging to make it.
I found it challenging to make it.
My digital learning object shows i added writing.
My digital learning object shows i added writing.
Next time I would change the font.
Next time I would change the font.
Kia ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Finn and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.
I liked the photo of the bear.
Maybe you could ade more lines.
the yellow highlighting reminds me of mine.
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ReplyDeletekia ora Carter.
ReplyDeleteI am Noah from saint marys.
I really like how you self assed.
maybe next time you could add some more writting.
I agree on goldilocks is guilty.
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ReplyDeleteMy name is India from saint marys school.
I really like how you hight lighted your work to show us that you achieved your success criteria. you could try adding words that help describe objects like mabe try to describe the colour of the thing that you're talking about in your writing. I also thought Goldie locks was guilty.
from India.